Octavium
Legionary
posted 08 June 2009 09:47
EDT (US)
2 / 8
A very interesting article, clearly the author knows the topic extensively and it shows in the depth and quality of information on offer. I would only criticise to say it is very very long, with no indication of this at the start, and can be a bit heavy at times. I'd half the lengths of some paragraphs and inject a few more lighter sentences and examples that are less serious to improve readability.
Tittus Labienus
Legionary
posted 08 June 2009 19:30
EDT (US)
5 / 8
I majored in history and read history books and historical novels for fun to this day. Yet I never fail to learn some things whenever I read your missives Lord Terikel. Well done suh.
Lab
JrvUnleashed
Legionary
posted 12 June 2009 11:17
EDT (US)
8 / 8
Great article. I always enjoy reading in depth about a particular subject. Being more of a "History of Everything Important that ever happened" kind of person, I some times skip over small details of things like this, so it's nice to read about specific things, and you're article was very well structured.