Andalus
Legionary
posted 16 September 2009 12:26
EDT (US)
9 / 18
Great work! Very powerful poem, and nice stanza progression, it works well to convey the emotion.
Edorix
High King of Britain
posted 10 December 2009 14:07
EDT (US)
16 / 18
Wow, I thought we had a lot of budding poets round here.